I hugged
him tightly and whispered in his ears, “Let’s get married”
him tightly and whispered in his ears, “Let’s get married”
“I
have a family”, he replied
have a family”, he replied
“So,
who am I?” I asked
who am I?” I asked
“You
are the fountain of love, in which I
drench my weary soul. I don’t wish to bind this love in a relationship, for
then it will become mortal”, he
replied as his fingers caressed my cheeks.
are the fountain of love, in which I
drench my weary soul. I don’t wish to bind this love in a relationship, for
then it will become mortal”, he
replied as his fingers caressed my cheeks.
I
lay there, in his arms, wondering where we were heading. Next morning, he had
left, leaving a note behind
lay there, in his arms, wondering where we were heading. Next morning, he had
left, leaving a note behind
“We are merely
two strangers who quench the thirst of our soul, every night.”
two strangers who quench the thirst of our soul, every night.”
That
note said it all!
note said it all!
PS:
This post is a part of Write Tribe prompt, 100 Words on Saturday 2014-2. Do
drop by and read some creative posts.
Be positive,
Be grateful,
Keep Smiling,
Love,
Gayu
Beautifully written with passion of a lusty heart who fulfill each other. But, I can help feeling sad for the characters who fulfill each other's physical and intimate needs yet are deprived of love. Superb Gayu:)
She is for love but he is chasing lust. But she shouldn't forget that she can nver build her foundation on ruins. very well-written story of two mis-matched people.
She is for love but he is chasing lust. But she shouldn't forget that she can nver build her foundation on ruins. very well-written story of two mis-matched people.
Good one, Gayu ! The woman yearns for love, he doesn't offer that…a well narrated crisp tale 🙂
sad one 🙁
well narrated.
I loved this one.
Very much a reality and the bare naked truth in some lives.
Thank you for dropping by! You know this story could b the stpry of many a gals lives. sad rt!
This is probably a true occurrence in many lives. Why be with someone who can't commit to you when you can be with someone who wants to be with only you. Beautifully written and thanks for writing on my prompt.