With some Writing Prompts, I am challenging myself,
stretching the already stretched comfort zone and now to top it all, I am
taking part in the Blog Marathon. I am joining Preeti Shenoy for the next 30 days and will
try my best to post every day.
stretching the already stretched comfort zone and now to top it all, I am
taking part in the Blog Marathon. I am joining Preeti Shenoy for the next 30 days and will
try my best to post every day.
I need your wishes and your valuable comments,
which help me to improve and give my best!
I came across this interesting prompt, from Poets United.
The challenge was to write a piece of poetry within 20 lines and it should have the words ‘Move’.
The challenge was to write a piece of poetry within 20 lines and it should have the words ‘Move’.
So here is my entry, hope you all enjoy it 🙂
When the heart breaks
And the soul pricks,
It’s difficult to move on.
When the tears flow
And the hurt blows,
It’s difficult to move on.
Years pass by,
And all you do is…
Silently cry,
Because…
It’s difficult to move on.
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Then comes a point in your Life,
When realization dawns,
When you make a feeble attempt…
To forgive, to let go,
Because…
Now you know,
You have to bury your past,
For a better present and brighter future,
You have to Move On!
Looking forward to your views:)
Be positive, Be grateful
Love,
Gayu
I like the way this piece moves through grief to the positive. (And, great Google image!)
Hi Rosemary,
That's how Life goes na, we fall, we fail, we cry and then we learn to get up, learn to live with the hurt and try to focus on the better:)
Even I loved the Image:) Thanks Rose for taking your time and reading this:)
Truly grateful to you:)
Gayu
I loved it…
Awww Scribby, hugs re, have to catch up so much of your stuff. I missed you so much here….
Perfect! This is the journey. It is in the Moving On that we heal and grow – far beyond what we might have had that particular past not happened. Great write.
Well said Sherry and thanks so much for stopping by:):)
Thank goodness for that moment so you can move on!
Yes, its just that one moment, when you have to Move on!
superb…i loved it
Thanks Supriya, your Tag is still pending.
Will do it now, as a part of my Blog Marathon
Dont' look back unless its a good view. loved the google image.and loved your fluid piece of writing. Keep it up.
Thanks would be a small word Kalpana.
Your motivation, keeps me going….:)
The google image is just so perfect na
After your poem for the Why I Write thing, 20 lines seems a little less doesn't it? 😉
Yeah. Time comes when we have to move on. Though we don't feel like it, or want the past happiness, we have to. Lovely one again.
(On a different note, could you please remove the Captcha verification. It's a pain to get past from mobile, sometimes even from system)
Leo, just got the verification removed:)
Writing this was a challenge, as limiting myself to 20 lines was difficult:P
and I agree with you, many times, we don't want to move on, as we find comfort in the past events
Painful true but, forgiveness is the key to move on and happiness.
Wish forgiveness was so easy na:)
i mean… Painful but true. 🙂
This was a good One….. Loved it…….
"or a better present and brighter future,
You have to Move On!"
Well stated
Thanks so much Lasha, those are even my fav lines:)
You have to bury the past – excellent and very true. Love is always painful.
Love is not painful, our expectations and ego are
hai…this is the frst time i'm ever putting a comment in any of the blogs..!:) loved the poetry..and a special mention about the pic…a perfect one..!!keep the great work going n all the very best to u..!! :)I would be really grateful if u reply me back as it does value me a lot and stimulate me..:)
Thanks so much for stopping by Madhu, have replied to you:) Keep reading!!!
yeah… 😀 😀 many thnz to u…sure!vl keep readng…:)
It is a challenge but well all that moves is well 🙂
well said Akila
Both parts of your poem are so true.
Moving on is difficult and so is forgiving. But once done it is liberating. Very nicely done.
Dropping by from the Verse First linkup.
Forgiving is even more difficult,the more we try doing it, the more it becomes difficult!
Thank you so much Suzy:)
well said.. move on!! very true.. u know something gayu, u actually write someone's feelings!!