“I don’t want my son to stay
with this characterless woman,” shouted Sanjeev in front of the judge. Divya
couldn’t believe her ears. Was this the same man who once called her the best
woman, best wife and best mother? But after what she did, was she worth to be
called the best. But was it her fault alone. She was lost in her thoughts and
just then the judge said, “The final verdict will be given on 25th June, till
then Master Rohit will stay with his mom.”
with this characterless woman,” shouted Sanjeev in front of the judge. Divya
couldn’t believe her ears. Was this the same man who once called her the best
woman, best wife and best mother? But after what she did, was she worth to be
called the best. But was it her fault alone. She was lost in her thoughts and
just then the judge said, “The final verdict will be given on 25th June, till
then Master Rohit will stay with his mom.”
Rohit came running into Divya’s
arms as soon as she came out of the room. He was just two years old and too
young to understand the complexities of relationships. She tucked him tight in
her arms as if she would never let him go.
arms as soon as she came out of the room. He was just two years old and too
young to understand the complexities of relationships. She tucked him tight in
her arms as if she would never let him go.
PS: Would you love to read more…???? Any suggestions…do let me know:)
Ofcourse would want to read more and know what happened that lead to this!!
what is this? Mukiyamana kattathula thodarumnu podra mathri iruuku.. n serials….. pls do the rest soon…
all the best for Divya…
Gayu,
Waiting to see how you develop it further.
Take care
Gayu.. this is not fair!!Please continue with the story 🙂
You have stoked the appetite. Can you please serve the main course ?
Gayu, waiting for the story to continue 😛
Dear Gayu,
Found your blog and read this beginning. You have piqued my interest. I really want to know how it goes and how it ends.
When are you posting part 2?
A nice teaser:)
@Me,thanks for the motivation yaar…posted part 2, still working on the 3rd part
@Geja
hmmm, thats how we build the suspense na:P
@Jack
When it comes to writing stories…you have think a lot about the plot and characters…that's a bit difficult for me…but sure will try to do the best.
@Meera
Need some tips…would like to work more on writing fiction.
@ RRamakrishnan
Main course will take time…please bear with me:)
@oijuggle
Welcome here…and I am glad you liked it.
@Rahul
Thanks a ton..!!